Wednesday, 27 November 2019

The Lighthouse

WALHT - use a range of sentences (complex)

Success Criteria
Self Assessment
I will put the subject at the end of the sentence. (A lonely, grumpy, old man was the lighthouse keeper) 😀😀😀
Start with an adverb - (Cautiously the lighthouse keeper went to remove the broken bulb) 😀😀

The Lighthouse
once was an old rugged little mountain and on the mountain lies, a dark dusty old Lighthouse in the Lighthouse lives a grumpy, lonely Old Man. But on one dark and stormy night, the heart of the Lighthouse ran out so the old cranky man grumpily stomped and clomped up the stairs to try to fix the light he pulled and pulled until the light would seek output, but before he could even put it down on the ground he tripped over his toolbox crashed and smashed against the old, dusty floor.“Arg what am I gonna do, now,” the Old Man said
“I know I could go out to town and ask the town folks
If they could grab anything that could glow to the Lighthouse”
cause in the distance he thought he could see a big giant cargo ship but it looked see-through and looked more of a pirate ship than a cargo ship. Then the Lighthouse started filling up with most of the townsfolks and with the townsfolks, they were holding lanterns and other things that glow brightly. But when the ship came closer they realised that it was a cargo ship it just the mist above the sea level. And now the old cranky man realised that the town’s folks were nice, friendly and helpful, and now he also realised when he hears the horrible noises from outside the window he knows that there just having fun. now he’s not mean grumpy sad or lonely because now he realised that he could change and be a kind person and that’s what he chose to a nice, caring and loving person and now he thinks everyone should be like.       

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