Wednesday 25 September 2019

The no title story

The no title story

In a galaxy far far away… There were two Bunnies. On the planet, mars searching
for a place to plant their carrots but it keeps on having meteor showers.
And then their arch enemy launched snakes to planet mars. ‘’Oh no’’ said Bunny one Darth potty head has launched the snakes to kill us. ‘’We should probably hide’’ said bunny two ‘’yep’’. So the two bunnies set off into a giant cornfield. Meanwhile in Darth potty heads base A.K.A his top-secret Barbie dream house. Okay okay, it’s a barbie dream house everybody had the same feeling it just lasted a little longer on him let's just get back to the story. Back at planet mars Bunny one and two just got out of the giant cornfield. ‘’Watch out!’’ oh no they have got us surrounded’’ said bunny two. Could this be the end of your friends bunny one and two, then suddenly… A mole called cole dug a hole around the bunnies and save their lives. ‘’Thanks u saved us’’ ‘’no problem’’ said Cole ‘’follow me’’ so the two bunnies followed cole through the hole. (5 hours later) They finally found the end of the hole. Then they ended up in Darth potty heads Barbie dream house. Did they come out of Darth potty heads pink toilet with pink toilet water? As they climbed out they saw Darth potty head in the pink shower singing into a pink microphone singing (the Barbie theme song). To be continued      

1 comment:

  1. hi this is Aaliyah.s from papakura Central school

    i like how you used your imagination to make the story more interesting
    next time you could you but the continued part in the bottom

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