thea and the tink-it-arium task 3

dad's not so fun holiday

WALHT - add detail

Success Criteria	Self Assessment
I will describe using repetition for effect	😀😀
I will describe how the character is feeling (emotion) by painting a picture in the reader's mind	😀😀

Dad’s not so fun holiday

Tears rolled down Jeff’s face as he glared out the window. he wanted  his dad, he hasn’t come home for five days, so Jeff had an idea so he went over to his mum’s bedroom door ‘knock knock’ ‘come in come in’ said Mum 

‘Can we go look for dad’ said Jeff

‘Sure’

They went over to there tiny little black golf cart and went to go look for his dad, then they sore a long trail of hair I suspected it was my dad cause he’s really hairy like Bigfoot so I had a feeling we should follow the hair so I told mum that we should try following the hair mum listened to me and we started following the hair trail. Then we came become upon a dumpsite we looked around for where the hair trail went so we had one more look at the dumpsite ‘I see it’ said mum

‘Where’ I said

It was leading to the dumpsite ‘Zoom’ A big blur stead past the entry, I was scared but I knew I dad was in there so I got out of the car and went to the dumpsite. ‘Where are you going Jeff’ said mum 

‘Gonna go look for dad’

‘I’ll stay here just in case I spot him from hear’

‘okay’

So Jeff went to the dump to look for there dad ‘swoosh’ I saw that giant hairy thing ‘Stop rite there’ said a booming voice that sounded like it was coming from the dumpster just up ahead.

‘Hello’ I said

‘Who are you’ said the booming voice

‘I’m Jeff who are you’ I said

‘I’m Stewart and what are you doing here’

‘We’re looking for my dad he’s gone missing also you can come out I won’t hurt you I promise’ 

So the Stewart took a big step out of the dumpster he looked like a giant pile of rubbish then he shook off all the junk off his body which formed a big pile of rubbish next to him. He turned out not to be very hairy actually he wasn’t hairy at all then I asked

‘Are you my dad’ hoping he would say yes

‘Well actually I think I am’ I was so relieved

He was actually my dad, but if he was my dad what was the giant bigfoot like creature

‘Bigfoot-like creature oh no do you mean Jimbob’

‘Who’s that’ I said

‘He’s the evilest and hairiest man to live you don’t want to bump into him also did you say you saw him at this dumpsite’

‘Yes I’m sure’ I said

‘Then we need to hide’

So Jeff and Stewart ran over to the secret underground base ‘bam bam bam’ ‘I think that’s him yup he’s right there’

‘WHAT WAS THAT SOUND’ he said 

Then he started throwing Stewart’s dumpsters all over the place 

‘Hey Stewart I’m recking all your dumpster’s and what you gonna do about’

‘Why are you just standing there you should try to stop him’ I said

‘I can’t defeat him by my own I need your help’

‘Okay I’ll try’

So jeff and Stewart sneak attacked, Jimbob and got him to the ground then the police came, thank-you Stewart you caught the most wanted and dangerous criminal well actually I couldn’t have done it without Jeff. THE END

thea and the think-it-arium task 2

Thea and the Think-it-arium

Today I was doing a google drawing about the book I was reading

I enjoyed making the google drawing

I found it challenging to make the charters

My digital learning object shows a kid with a goldfish

The mystery of science

Today I was learning about Newton's cradle.

I enjoyed playing with it.

I found it challenging to write about it.

My digital learning object shows how newton's cradle works.

Next time I would change and write about Jacobs ladder.

Rotorua Trip

WALHT - describe (personal voice).
Success Criteria

Self Assessment

Check my plan for how I was feeling
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Write down what my body did when I felt this.
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Rotorua Trip
“Beep Beep” went the alarm clock as I slowly rolled out of bed, then I realised today was the day I was going to the Rotorua torment I was so electrified I couldn’t wait! So I leapt out of bed and bolted through my packing, we were staying at Saint mary’s school Rotorua. 

At school, It was crystal clear to tell who was going to the Rotorua tournament.

There were four different activities 1. soccer, 2. hokey, 3. bible reading 4. chess. I was playing soccer. 

Then finally after 4 hours or extra finally we were there me, Chase, Harfateh, Squid and my dad were the first people there. Once everyone else got there, we went to room 6 and set up our beds.

Then after that, we had to practice for what sport/activity we were doing then after about ten minutes a whole heap of people from the soccer team got injured.

Then the next day everybody was so pumped, they couldn’t wait then after about 1 hour or less we were finally going to John paul college A.K.A the place where we were doing all the activities.

The first game I was trembling but we thrashed them like 8/0 to us, our second game we lost 3/1 to them, our third game we won 5/0 to us, then the fourth game we won 7/0 to us again, then the last game we won 5/0 to us and came second overall. 

We all came inside to listen to the man who was announcing who won the Sebastian cup. And it was saint Patrick school after that everyone went back outside and went back to Gisborne THE END. 


  

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