Today we made a rap about the Sacraments of initiation for R.E.
I enjoyed creating the wevideo because making stuff like this is really fun.
It was difficult to edit it but it was still really fun
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WALHT: use persuasive techniques (FEARRR) to enhance our writing
Success Criteria: | Self Assessment😀😀😀😀 |
I have used my first technique to enhance my writing | 😀😀😀😀 |
I have used my second technique to enhance my writing | 😀😀 |
I have used my third technique to enhance my writing | 😀😀😀 |
Use at least three different (FEARRR) persuasive techniques in your writing. |
Goalies, strikers, wingers and defenders, but the question is who is best of the best. Today I will tell you who the three best football players.
Firstly I going to tell you who the third-best football player is Pele. I know what your thinking whos Pele? If you don’t know who Pele is you’ll find out soon. The Brazilian football player started his career at only fifteen years old. he had been awarded many awards and world titles and the only football player to have won 3 world cups. If you still don’t know who Pele is there’s a whole about that you could go watch.
Furthermore, who is the second-best football player in the world? Diego Maradona, although he cheated in the 1986 world cup and handballed into the goal wich stopped England from winning, he is still one of the most famous football players in the world. Maradona holds the record for the most number of fouls in a world cup, during the 1986 world cup in Mexico he fouled 53 times. He also holds the record of the most fouls suffered in one game in a game, when Italy fouled him 23 times in 1982.
Now I will tell you the best football player in the whole entire world. Who is it? Messi of course if you don’t know who he is I can see some facts about him. Messi was born on 24 June 1987. He spent his whole entire professional career with Barcelona where he has won a club record of 33 trophies, including ten la Liga, four UEFA champions league titles and six Copas del ray. He’s also won six balondoors.
In conclusion, I have told you facts about the three best football players in the whole entire world, Messi, Maradona and Pele.
Active Reflection: | My Reflection |
What have I done well? | I have Used lots of facts and information. |
Next step: | I have Ad Some more emotive language. |