An Exciting Moment Recount

An Exciting Moment Recount

Roald Dahl
WALHT: write the body of a text using paragraphs.	Self Assessment 🌝 🌝 🌝
I have 1 idea per paragraph.	🌝 🌝 🌝
I have 4-5 sentences of supporting detail in each paragraph.	🌝 🌝 🌝
I have used different sentence starters.	🌝 🌝
I have AT LEAST 3 paragraphs.	🌝 🌝 🌝

Sisters Birthday

I was so excited! It was my Sister's Birthday today. She was deciding where we would go for dinner while my brother and I were shouting at Her to choose McDonald’s. “Can we go to The Wrap?” said my sister Danielle “no!” shouted me and my brother in a disappointed voice.

Then we all hopped in the truck and started driving to the wrap while my Brother and I again were moaning since we couldn’t go to McDonald’s. But my Sister was so over me and my brother moaning that she said that we can just go to McDonald’s. “So are we going to The Wrap or McDonalds,” said my Dad “McDonalds!” my brother shouted.


At McDonald’s, Dad asked us what we were having and we were all having our usual Me, Mum and Dad were having Big Macs, my sister was having a Wrap and my brother was having Chicken nuggets. It was so delicious, I was so right about going to McDonald’s.

Five Guiding Principles

Night Vision Goggles

I was learning about night vision goggles because they are very intersting.

I found it difficult to draw the body of the person because I kept on messing up.

I enjoyed drawing the night vision goggles because of the shapes and granted colours.

Next time I would change it and put some facts in because I don't have many facts.

Quake, Rattle and Roll

Quake, Rattle and Roll

What have you learnt about why people might die in an earthquake?

Yes, Because the unstable buildings crumble down on the people but stone and brick buildings are the most dangerous in particular because of how heavy and unsafe they are.

Did the earthquakes themselves cause these deaths? How do you know?

No, the buildings do because the earthquakes cause the buildings to crumble on the people

What connections can you make with your own school or area? Do you

know if older buildings have been made stronger?

None. but I would think that the older buildings would crumble down but then the people would learn how to make the newer buildings stronger against earthquakes.

What was the most interesting idea for you in this book?

That one of the earthquakes were so big that the people had to evacuate the town.

What new information have you learnt?

That it’s not the earthquakes which cause the deaths it’s the buildings.

Room two's favourite videogame

WALHT: Understand the data we have collected

What had the most? Minecraft

What had the least? Fifa, pubg and star wars 

What was the difference between the most and the least amount? 8

How many people did you collect data from? 17

How might you use your data? Room 2’s fave videogame

Kawa Of Care